schoolbook

Little Thing

Little bee,little tree and a little king.
There is a cup of tea beside the sea.
After drinking the cup of tea.
The king has a key to open the tree.
That can help the bee to get out of the tree.

評語：Gary
*The title is very appropriate fou the poem.

*You kept the words and grammar simple so it is easy fou everyone to read and understand.

*As for rhyme,it is almost too much. I mean there are almost too many words that rhyme. If there are too many words that rhyme,then a poem becomes difficult to read.

*Overall,I think you had a great idea and you tried to make it the best you could.

*Great attention-grabbing poem!