Target
Always full of passion.
We all have own decision.
Everyone is full of ambition.
We are in the same association.
評語：Gary
*The title was “Target”and I understand the meaning easily. Fine choice.
*The layout of the poem (each line is centered and each line is longer than the previous)is a great attention-getter. The layout drew my eyes to the paper and the poem.
*Personally,I think you have a good start and would like to see you add another verse!
*Great job─Congratulations!
Always full of passion.
We all have own decision.
Everyone is full of ambition.
We are in the same association.
評語：Gary
*The title was “Target”and I understand the meaning easily. Fine choice.
*The layout of the poem (each line is centered and each line is longer than the previous)is a great attention-getter. The layout drew my eyes to the paper and the poem.
*Personally,I think you have a good start and would like to see you add another verse!
*Great job─Congratulations!
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