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Newspaper

I see a newspaper.
It says that smoking is harmful.
So I don't smoke.
I see a newspaper.
It says that watching TV is harmful.
So I don't watch TV.
I see a newspaper.
It says that eating delicious food is harmful.
So I don't see the newspaper.



評語：Gary


* This was a very interesting poem.

* You took a simple,everyday activity,reading the newspaper,and it made me think a lot about how we all read the newspaper. Is the newspaper good or bad?!

*As for structure of the sentences,the last line says,“So I don't see the newspaper.” I think I would change the word ‘see’to‘read’because really we read the newspaper just lust see it or look at it.

*Interesting idea─Congratulations!