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Little Thing Little bee,little tree and a little king. There is a cup of tea beside the sea. After drinking the cup of tea. The king has a key to open the tree. That can help the bee to get out of the tree. 評語：Gary *The title is very appropriate fou the poem. *You kept the words and grammar simple so it is easy fou everyone to read and understand. *As for rhyme,it is almost too much. I mean there are almost too many words that rhyme. If there are too many words that rhyme,then a poem becomes difficult to read. *Overall,I think you had a great idea and you tried to make it the best you could. *Great attention-grabbing poem!