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Chocolate Chocolate is bitter. Chocolate is sweet. Chocolate is like my heart. My heart often changes between bitter and sweet. It's all because you. 評語：Gary *First of all, I love chocolate so this was a wonderful poem for me. *It is easy and simple to understand and follow what you tell us about chocolate. *The last line seems to be missing a bit in grammar;I think I would change the last line to “It's all because of（of底下要加一條線） you.”The way you wrote it is fine, but this way just makes it sound a little bit better. *Very interesting poem!