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Target Always full of passion. We all have own decision. Everyone is full of ambition. We are in the same association. 評語：Gary *The title was “Target”and I understand the meaning easily. Fine choice. *The layout of the poem (each line is centered and each line is longer than the previous)is a great attention-getter. The layout drew my eyes to the paper and the poem. *Personally,I think you have a good start and would like to see you add another verse! *Great job─Congratulations!