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Newspaper I see a newspaper. It says that smoking is harmful. So I don't smoke. I see a newspaper. It says that watching TV is harmful. So I don't watch TV. I see a newspaper. It says that eating delicious food is harmful. So I don't see the newspaper. 評語：Gary * This was a very interesting poem. * You took a simple,everyday activity,reading the newspaper,and it made me think a lot about how we all read the newspaper. Is the newspaper good or bad?! *As for structure of the sentences,the last line says,“So I don't see the newspaper.” I think I would change the word ‘see’to‘read’because really we read the newspaper just lust see it or look at it. *Interesting idea─Congratulations!